Unforseen Consequences
Created 18 years ago2005-12-09 23:02:14 UTC by
Archie
Created 18 years ago2005-12-09 23:02:14 UTC by
Archie
Posted 17 years ago2006-07-23 22:51:44 UTC
Post #191410
it is a nice faceposing job, like rim said
Posted 17 years ago2006-07-24 03:04:48 UTC
Post #191413
15th was pretty good.
Although the van in the frame, just before the crash was a bit too high off the ground, imo.
And the crash frame wasn't convincing enough. I mean.. A van falling off a cliff should make a pretty big boom with gibs n' blood everywhere, not just smoke. You could add some flying auto parts and make the guy have some blood on his shirt for some extra realism.
16th had pretty good posing and I really liked the idea.
Although the van in the frame, just before the crash was a bit too high off the ground, imo.
And the crash frame wasn't convincing enough. I mean.. A van falling off a cliff should make a pretty big boom with gibs n' blood everywhere, not just smoke. You could add some flying auto parts and make the guy have some blood on his shirt for some extra realism.
16th had pretty good posing and I really liked the idea.
Posted 17 years ago2006-07-25 00:00:21 UTC
Post #191588
I was actually thinking, after reading issue 15, "wouldnt it be awesome if GMan saved the day?" It's like you've got ESP
Posted 17 years ago2006-07-25 11:23:55 UTC
Post #191630
I liked 16, but 15 was a bit w00tish.
Gman ftw
Gman ftw
Posted 17 years ago2006-07-26 21:02:42 UTC
Post #191758
I was actually thinking, after reading issue 15, "wouldnt it be awesome if GMan saved the day?" It's like you've got ESPhehehehehe.
It'll be a while before i get 17 done..
Posted 17 years ago2006-09-04 12:08:31 UTC
Post #195596
ISSUE 17!!!!!
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Maps used:
de_port (CSS)
notes:
I know de_port isn't technically a rebel base, but i couldnt be bothered going through all the coast maps to find the one with Odessa, simply for the stairs gag.
It's not a particularly big issue, but i felt that continuing the story in the same issue would cheapen the already terrible stair gag.
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Maps used:
de_port (CSS)
I know de_port isn't technically a rebel base, but i couldnt be bothered going through all the coast maps to find the one with Odessa, simply for the stairs gag.
It's not a particularly big issue, but i felt that continuing the story in the same issue would cheapen the already terrible stair gag.
Posted 17 years ago2006-09-04 12:27:06 UTC
Post #195601
possing in panel 3 looks wierd. and you could have pulled off the gag a bit better.
other then that its pretty good
other then that its pretty good
Posted 17 years ago2006-09-04 12:43:20 UTC
Post #195613
You want me to comment. K.
I don't get it.
Brittish humor and HL2 comics are definitely not my thing.
I don't get it.
Brittish humor and HL2 comics are definitely not my thing.
Posted 17 years ago2006-09-04 13:04:48 UTC
Post #195616
thanks Gargly 
Muzz... erm.. yep
Muzz... erm.. yep
Posted 17 years ago2006-09-04 13:08:09 UTC
Post #195617
Pretty short, although the quality is obiviously increasing with every issue.
Posted 17 years ago2006-09-04 14:46:32 UTC
Post #195628
Its a nice comic. Good work, i agree with Daubster about the improving quality and all.
Posted 17 years ago2006-09-05 19:08:23 UTC
Post #195736
thanks 38_98!
thanks Daubeh!
Oh come on
dont tell me that's all the feedback i'm getting
thanks Daubeh!
Oh come on
dont tell me that's all the feedback i'm getting 
Posted 17 years ago2006-09-05 19:40:58 UTC
Post #195738
Good posing, though he could have a teency bit more expression.
That and the gag sucked :P.
That and the gag sucked :P.
Posted 17 years ago2006-09-06 04:56:39 UTC
Post #195753
Posing in panel 3 looks weird and you could have pulled off the gag a bit better. Other then that its pretty good
Pretty short, although the quality is obiviously increasing with every issue.
Its a nice comic. Good work, i agree with Daubster about the improving quality and all.
Good posing, though he could have a teency bit more expression.What I'd say if they hadn't already said it thus taking my line of speech so meh.
That and the gag sucked...
Posted 17 years ago2006-09-06 09:09:12 UTC
Post #195759
ISSUE 18!!!!!!!!!
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Maps used:
de_port (CSS)
NOTES:
I really think i used too much JPEG compression here, but the image size was dangerously large at 90% quality, so i took it down to 70%.
Next time i think i'll sacrifice file size for image quality
Oh, and i figured the stair gag was just so goood that it had to make a re-appearance
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Maps used:
de_port (CSS)
I really think i used too much JPEG compression here, but the image size was dangerously large at 90% quality, so i took it down to 70%.
Next time i think i'll sacrifice file size for image quality
Oh, and i figured the stair gag was just so goood that it had to make a re-appearance
Posted 17 years ago2006-09-06 09:19:08 UTC
Post #195760
The image quality is really way too paint-ish.
You can't help it, if the comic has more frames, than usual. It's no big deal, if the filesize goes over 500 kb..
I'd suggest merging 17 and 18, since 17 is pretty short and the joke is repeated.
You can't help it, if the comic has more frames, than usual. It's no big deal, if the filesize goes over 500 kb..
I'd suggest merging 17 and 18, since 17 is pretty short and the joke is repeated.
Posted 17 years ago2006-09-06 09:20:10 UTC
Post #195761
NOTES:To be honest, the last 2 comics have just been continuing the story.. It's surprisingly difficult to put something funny in-between a reasonably serious plot.. for me anyway
I really think i used too much JPEG compression here, but the image size was dangerously large at 90% quality, so i took it down to 70%.
Next time i think i'll sacrifice file size for image quality.
Oh, and i figured the stair gag was just so goood that it had to make a re-appearance
Posted 17 years ago2006-09-06 18:19:46 UTC
Post #195812
You should make "stair falling" his "thing". But make sure it feels fresh each time.
"I've been wondering around..."
Wandering perhaps?
"I've been wondering around..."
Wandering perhaps?
Posted 17 years ago2006-09-29 05:58:24 UTC
Post #197915
ISSUE 19!!!!
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Maps used:
de_port
Notes:
Yes, two frames in this comic are identical. Why? I deleted a bad frame and had an odd number of them.
Yes i should stick to a set number of frames, but hey, what's a bit of excitement?
Also, i just noticed that Frohman abused Norman in this comic.
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Maps used:
de_port
Yes, two frames in this comic are identical. Why? I deleted a bad frame and had an odd number of them.
Yes i should stick to a set number of frames, but hey, what's a bit of excitement?
Also, i just noticed that Frohman abused Norman in this comic.
Posted 17 years ago2006-09-29 09:44:41 UTC
Post #197924
Loltastic.
I've run out of good comments
I've run out of good comments
Posted 17 years ago2006-09-29 10:35:56 UTC
Post #197927
didn't really make me laugh, but thats just me, I don't really laugh at any comics.
Some of the posing could be improved.
Other then that good job.
Some of the posing could be improved.
Other then that good job.
Posted 17 years ago2006-09-29 16:48:48 UTC
Post #197949
looks like he had time to shave inbetween changing suits =D
Posted 17 years ago2006-09-30 10:04:48 UTC
Post #198044
Why are some of the speech bubbles coloured red, blue and yellow in the beginning?
Content is good as always though!
Content is good as always though!
Posted 17 years ago2006-09-30 10:48:30 UTC
Post #198064
Why are some of the speech bubbles coloured red, blue and yellow in the beginning?Different people talking, take a closer look
Posted 17 years ago2006-10-03 17:06:11 UTC
Post #198408
madcow are correct! 
Thanks for the comments.
I must say, its hard to coreograph a battle to look good in a comic.
Thanks for the comments.
I must say, its hard to coreograph a battle to look good in a comic.
Posted 17 years ago2006-10-04 17:08:53 UTC
Post #198517
ISSUE 20!!!!
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Maps used:
unforseen_consequences.bsp
NOTES:
unforseen_consequences.bsp includes Rosa's bar, the oil-rigged version, the prison and several other locations that have been used in the past, or will be used in the future. I got sick of constantly changing between maps. Oh, and yes, i know that there is waaaaay too much JPG compression. My bad.
Click here to visit the website
Maps used:
unforseen_consequences.bsp
unforseen_consequences.bsp includes Rosa's bar, the oil-rigged version, the prison and several other locations that have been used in the past, or will be used in the future. I got sick of constantly changing between maps. Oh, and yes, i know that there is waaaaay too much JPG compression. My bad.
Posted 17 years ago2006-10-04 17:13:55 UTC
Post #198519
LOL
First one that actually made laugh!
First one that actually made laugh!
Posted 17 years ago2006-10-04 17:22:28 UTC
Post #198525
yay ^_^
Posted 17 years ago2006-10-04 19:44:24 UTC
Post #198547
lmao! Nice job!! That was funny as hell!!
Posted 17 years ago2006-10-04 21:43:32 UTC
Post #198560
Yes I laughed at this one, Posing was good apart from a few little things. And it seems a lot cleaner now.
Posted 17 years ago2006-10-04 22:20:07 UTC
Post #198563
This one was long, but the length is made up for by good comics. I lol'd several times.
Posing on the last 2 frames is pretty good
. In the 11th frame though, when he's about to sit... It didn't really look like he was preparing to lay down, rather he was just squatting to take a dump or somthing. Still though, overal, the posing is nice .
I suppose my only other critique would be a few more camera angles.. unless a single camera angle was what you were aiming for to mimic the single PoV that a security camera would have or somthing.
Posing on the last 2 frames is pretty good
. In the 11th frame though, when he's about to sit... It didn't really look like he was preparing to lay down, rather he was just squatting to take a dump or somthing. Still though, overal, the posing is nice .I suppose my only other critique would be a few more camera angles.. unless a single camera angle was what you were aiming for to mimic the single PoV that a security camera would have or somthing.
Posted 17 years ago2006-10-06 05:45:20 UTC
Post #198688
yea, I laughed a bit too.That 2 guards converstation is great.Good job, Hunter
Posted 17 years ago2006-10-06 13:36:26 UTC
Post #198719
Hahahah!
The whole joke was great, although the posing needed more work in some frames. While the conversation was quite well-made - I really didn't like the posing in the frames, where the guards were looking at the ceiling. The poses, while laying down really didn't look natural.
And as Rotator said, a few more cam angles/close-ups could've been nice.
Anyways - good job.
The whole joke was great, although the posing needed more work in some frames. While the conversation was quite well-made - I really didn't like the posing in the frames, where the guards were looking at the ceiling. The poses, while laying down really didn't look natural.
And as Rotator said, a few more cam angles/close-ups could've been nice.
Anyways - good job.
Posted 17 years ago2006-10-06 13:55:01 UTC
Post #198720
Maybe could've made them look up and fall over backwords... lol. Good job anyways, I laughed a ton...
Posted 17 years ago2006-10-06 14:14:08 UTC
Post #198723
Hahahaha, that comic was kick ass!
"I can't get up now"
"I can't get up now"
Posted 17 years ago2006-10-06 18:46:34 UTC
Post #198753
From my first thought of this issue, i had only planned for one camera angle. I simply thought it was the best way to convey the conversation, with Norman walking by in the background... I suppose there was a twinge of inspiration from a security camera, but mostly i just thought it was the best plan.
I'm really glad you all liked it ^_^
I'm really glad you all liked it ^_^
Posted 17 years ago2006-10-06 21:20:59 UTC
Post #198760
Yep. It's good stuff. Keep em' commin'.
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