second chance lvl 1

Screenie?

umm i did load a screenie but it came wit error i try again

no luck it wont display it

Oh god why do people like you torture half-life like this?
This is the worst map i have ever seen.
-Texturing atrocious.
-Repeated textures.
-Bland textures.
-Roof textures used on floor etc.
-Pointless use of weapons.
-Fell out of map at the second map change.
-When it says "yes we have been observing you for quite some time", theres pics of "gordon" as a child, adult etc. But on one of the pics hes a little white child, then he's a black dude.
-Pointless rooms, that are too large.
-The voice is coming from literally nowhere.
-The lights come from nowhere.
-Bad lighting.
-Bad architecture.
+The map change works........ occasionally.

Read all the tutorials, twice even.
Download a few example maps.
download a few really good maps like:
http://cariad.co.za/twhl/mapvault_map.php?id=1328

Any way check the finished section, and look for a map called ominous activities, and download it, and learn from it.

Ok, it is wrong.

this is actually a pretty fun map, except for the part where i started in the void at level 3 and had to noclip back into the level :S

+Nice Layout
+Level Changes!
+Entity placement
-Texturing and architecture
-level change on lvl 3 doesnt work
-i see light, but where is it coming from?

OVERAL==3 STARS

fun mappack none the less, keep working on it.

thanku by the way this was my first map pack and its unfinished oh and i did this a long time ago so my skill hav improved

thnx for tips people i will apply them

I HATE IT!
Look around the world you live in and notice the detail that is making up its complexity. Maybe if you had put a bit more effort into the little things that make up this great big world, I would have thought otherwise

I hope that you do apply some changes to this map, although maybe it would be better if you start a new and clense yourself of this impurity.
1 star

twain you hav every right to hate it as it was my first and i hav improved since then (even i hate it) i was just seeing what people thought of my ideas not how it looked cause now im studying architecture and shall apply it to all my other maps that will be made in the future (thnx for all the tips etc buh bye)

habboi

Judging by the screenie, im not dling this. And floater, giving ppl good ratings just out of niceness is counter productive. If he thinks this is 3 star quality, then hell hardly make the effort to improve.

well it is old and i never want to see it again

and i mean it

Even though all the negative comments are true more or less, I must admit it was interesting and fun going throught the level.

sucks

Tis a shame actually cause I had so many ideas back then but nowadays I can't think of anything to map!

Also looking at the picture again I now realise how bad it was :S

At least I learnt from my mistakes excpet those lame ass noob bitches who make a map, get abused and don't improve!

G-kid leave habboi alone, hes great and soon to be my wifey

Heh okey

Lol!
Cool, you've improved your self agot scince this map, I can tell. ^^

Oh heck yeah
This map brings back memories!

Many memories! I miss the old days of HL1 mapping.

One Question: Uploaded 21 Aug 04 21:43 - 2 Years ago....

It was my first map...Check dates yeah...

Also pwned! Ha PWNED!

This was a fun map actually, if you read this message then you have found my secret announcement.

I am making a video about my Mapping Past, I was close to finishing but I don't like the limits of Windows Video Maker so I am winning another program to make a decent video.

Livewire got caught watching pr0n by his mother.

Wellll... hmmm... where do I start... okay, its not the best map, and its not the worst, but since its probably your first map, then I can understand that, I will start with the 1st level.
Level 1
A.-Very bright in first room
B.+Lots of dead bodys made it more funny then scary
C.-Wtf? 2nd room had file cabinet textures as the walls
Level 2
A.-I'm blind... way too many lights in the 2nd level, reducing the amount would make it look much better and maby look a little scaryer
B.+All of the differnt textures made me think it was a cartoon
C.?In the 2nd level thiers 2 Large boxs, you could fit a gargantua in thier, and when the player is heading for the doors, the box brakes and a gargantua pops out of the box.
Level 3
A.-What the? I fell through the level, well, you have probably had lots of people tell you that.
B.-Did not get the point of level 3
Level 4
A.?Geussing you never botherd to finish it
I would say more, but I don't like saying maps are bad, unless they are REALY bad, but this map, at LEAST gets a 3*'s.

Heh nice of you to review it but it is the past...And it'll stay here as a lesson to all.

...A lesson in torture.

Indeed

Habboi loves carrying on conversations with himself sometimes?

I want to join in.

None may enter the mind of Habboi.

Humble beginnings.

An under-appreciated masterpiece.

Bows Thank you! Gawsh, I wish more people realized how awesome I am...psh.

yea this is one of the best mappacks on HL i've seen, and thats prolly because there arent very many mappack on TWHL to begin with... though this shouold be renamed 'zoo tour' instead of whatever it is right now