Nah that is really good because:
It is clear
Posing is good
Bubbles are greatly shaped and easy to read
I can't get over how well it looks and the way it just looks so neat!
Well done!
Red just give him an answer instead of saying crap like that...You may be in a bad mood but later on your gonna laugh at yourself for being a jackass
Think about stuff before getting angry or can't be asked to write...In fact don't write a reply if your lazy.
Anyway again Dr Mapper well done! Must have taken you a while and I like the suspense! Make more