RPG ADVENTURE #1 [closed] Created 18 years ago2005-05-18 12:21:26 UTC by Archie

looks blindly innocent

very well.. if i must sniffle i shall not write another chapter..

snorfle

snorfle?!?!?! LMAO! what the hell is snorfle?

snorfle- hunting call

Is it like a cross between a snort and a grunt?

no, you fool! In the language of the hunters (we are but an ancient race) snorfle is one of the most sacred acts that can be performed by a hunter...

Roughly translated it means

'OMFG!!! LEMONS! THE LEMONS ARE EVERYWHERE! JESUS CHRIST IM GONNA HAVE TO BRING OUT MA SHOT GUN! POW BANG SNOFEE'

Let's get back on topic, shall we?

good idea! Who's the next writer?

I think unbreakable!!!

I'm sorry guys, this story turned out to become out of my taste.
I don't know what to write. Chapter 18 is up for grabs.

Whens my turn..!
I'm still WAITING-->

-unbreakable

its been 2 days. the slot is open. Whoever takes the flame has the choice of continuing 1 of the 2 possible chpter 17s.

Who's up?

Congratulation! The hunter you will continue

i would write chap. 18, but im kinda nervous on doing so, so i agree with ZeG

nervous? and i cant write another chapter. Everybody will flame me for trying to do everything like they did last time. IT WAS A SIMPLE MISTAKE PEOPLE

nevermind, i dont mind writing, and what i meant by nervous is...well...i dunno really

Maybe we should choose someone else then

I didn't want to write and I was nervous too but in the end I wrote a chapter!!

well.....alright, ill do a chapter <u><b>ONLY</b></u> if people want me too

...im crap with HTML.....

that would be because you used the wrong symbol. And i believe it's bbcode but im not sure.

[ b ] [ / b] [ u ] [ / u ] [ i ] [ / i ]

im gonna keep that in mind in future

Go for it

ok, let me just write something up....

Me!

After 38_98, if he wants you to continue!!

Chapter 18 Sacrifice

Y'ato woke sleepily to find himself in a dark, damp room. Light shone through steel bars and the far end of the room, on the other side of the bars a guard was sitting quietly, a load snoring noise erupting from him periodically. Y'ato ran through the recent events in his mind, after fighting a vicious battle in the arena. He had been brought before the king where he had something about a prophecy. He was puzzled with the part on the prophecy. Just as he was thinking this a large shadow was casted over him, his eyes were immediately greeted with the familiar figure in which he had seen with king Leetus. His instincts naturally urged him to morph, just as he was doing so one of the guards charged up and bashed him agaisnt the wall, the little strength that Y'ato had quickly dispersed. The priest approached him silently, speaking as he went ''You may have heard me talking of a prophecy, correct?''
he nodded quickly. ''Good, saves me having to explain that bit....'' he trailed off, his voice sounding rather odd. He cleared his throat nosiliy and began his explanation in a deep loud voice ''Let me fill you in on the rest of it, our prophecy states that when the full moon reaches its zenith once during every month, that the light will show us the path to the tomb of the ancients....'' He trailed off again in the same odd voice. To Y'ato, his explanation was rather confusing. The priest once again continued ''but to show the way, 3 offerings must be made, one of earth, one of sky and one of.....flesh'' A cruel smile formed on his face, his guards split to form a semi-circle round Y'ato. ''but of course, we need the flesh of a particular person. Those of which have been gifted in the ways you have, we have tried many time each month to follow the prophecy. And we believe you are the key'' As soon as the priest finished he clicked his fingers and the guards moved in on Y'ato, clubs raised, weak and defenceless. He was knocked out in moments...

Errrrr....i dunno who should go next
Sorry about spelling mistakes

You are sepposed to choose!!

dr.mapper, you wanna go, you go next

ooh exciting!

everyone lookat the end of 38_98's chapter - learn from it - it can go ANYWHERE and that is the best ending a chapter can have on this thread

nice chap, 38_98

thanks, im surprised i did well seeing that i sat there for something like an hour trying to think of a prophecy onlt to think of that

Has dr.mapper come up yet?

COME ON DR.MAPPER! LAST DAY

I believe its time you choose a new sucessor 38_98, like me

go on then villian, i cant really think of anyone else

Chapter 19 - The Truth is Painful

Y'ato awoke to the sound of priests chanting incantations of old. Dora maka vasekai, dora maka... It meant little to Y'ato, although he had recovered his lost memory, this was a language unused for a millennia. Y'ato was very drowsey, as if drugged. He slowly opened his eyes but they kept closing without his control, it became a massive struggle in order to stay awake. The sight he saw didn't seem worth the effort. Stone ceiling, he finally realized he was facing up. His arms were strapped to the floor, or at least, what he thought was the floor. His body felt limp and without strength, there was no way he could morph in this state. Y'ato rolled his head to the side and began to stare at a torch off in the distance, the light appeared as a line to his blurred eyes. He tried with all his might to keep his eyes on the light. If only he could stay awake, he might survive. The chanting priests we're nowhere in sight, but the words still echoed through the cavern. After some time, Y'ato had regained enough strength to roll his head to the other side. There he saw barred window; it was night, and the sky was filled with stars. After what seemed like hours, he heard a door open and close.
"Who's there?" Y'ato said in a quiet, scared voice.
"One who knows why you're here..." Replied a familiar voice.
"Nemmerle! Why are you here!?" Y'ato was so confused. "Have you come to finish me off?"
"That is your fate, is it not? Do you remember when we first met? In that white room where I asked for your help."
"Yes, and I also remember you tried to kill me!"
"That is... correct, if you look from your point of view. However, we're you in my position, you would have done the same. Your death would have made life simpler for everyone, the whole world could have continued living. Im supprised you never realized who you really we're. Seltor really did a number on you. You're his masterpiece, his ultimate weapon. He built you from the beginning, a perfect mixture of hate, strength and well... incompetence."
"What the hell are you talking about!?" Y'ato screamed, "I have nothing to do with Seltor!"
"So sadly mistaken you are. Do you remember your parents?"
"Of course not! Seltor murdered them while I was a baby! Thats why Im going to kill him."
"That is your first misconception, your parents we're Seltor's elite. When he found out about you, he decided to put you to great use. Your parents willingly gave you to Seltor for his Y'ato project. That is where you get your name by the way. You we're brainwashed since birth to hate Seltor with a passion so great, nothing could stop you. Then you would do anything for revenge. You would then be sent back in time by the so called god 'All' who infact, was Seltor himself. Here you were to cause havoc while Seltor's elite took control of the city and ensured victory for Seltor. Even now, his warriors are infiltrating the palace, about to assassinate the king. Seltor built you into the perfect person for the prophecy, the whole city is currently in delusions of grandure. They believe you're death will show them a mythical temple where a fountain of youth is!"
"It can't be true! You must be lying! I don't believe it!!!" Y'ato tried to cosole himself but something told him it was true.
"Yes, Seltor sold you on the story of winning the war for the light morphers didnt he? My goodness, incompetence nothing, your flat out moron. The only thing that is going to stop this whole mess is you. I was lucky to morph my vital organs out of the way of the impaling spear, but I am still quite wounded because of you. I won't be able to stop the warriors myself you're going to have to clean up this mess you made.

Oh shoot, a sucessor... Umm how bout Unbreakable again?

cool chap, kinda freaky going back on Y'atos past and all that, who going next then?

To much to read Well. I just finished reading it. Nice btw

I'm sorry guys, this story turned out to become out of my taste.

:

shuffles foot. I'll do it.. considering we didnt use my last one, i havent done one in AGES!

I said Unbreakable... If he doesnt show in 2 days its all your Hunter.

2 days long gone. the chapter is mine! muahahaha

Have fun...

cool

I stopped reading at chapter 5

When will it ennnnnnnnnnnnnd?

i dunno, maybe Y'ato will die from some murdering spree by a giant banana, who knows

damn, i have to re-write my chapter, that was EXACTLY my idea

Chapter 20 - Pwnage

This Y'ato guy I know nothing about since I haven't been following this is brutally slain at the hands of a giant banana who goes on to slaughter the whonkeys and in return the world.

Only kidding, of course ;x

RabidMonkey777 thats the best chapter! (just kidding)