AH! AHHHH! AHHHHHHH!
Now that that scare is over...Ahem
Bloody nora that quality needs fixing!!! Only reason mine was bad-ish was because I had to save it as jpg :
The um bubbles are well um ok but not good, not professional if you get me and the text font doesn't help.
Try downloading cartoon fonts, Hunter helped me and gave me this link:
http://www.highfonts.com/fontsearch.asp?f=0&ord=comicSome of those poses are good, I know posing is hard and I often give up myself but try harder
Uhm apart from that not so bad, the story is very mysterious, i'm curious to see how it continues.