Here's the G-mod comic I've been working on and will be working on, pages 1-4.
Stole the idea from Ravenholm Armoury (Superb comic), and it plays out in d1_trainstation_02, but the rest is mine. I promise.
Comments/Suggestions most welcome.
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Yet another comic.
Created 18 years ago2005-12-11 17:24:21 UTC by
ZombieLoffe
Created 18 years ago2005-12-11 17:24:21 UTC by
ZombieLoffe
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-11 17:24:21 UTC
Post #151748
Thought I'd make my own thread for this.
Here's the G-mod comic I've been working on and will be working on, pages 1-4.
Stole the idea from Ravenholm Armoury (Superb comic), and it plays out in d1_trainstation_02, but the rest is mine. I promise.
Comments/Suggestions most welcome.Yes, I know, there're already enough G-mod comics... but shit, it's fun to make and even funnier to pimp .
Here's the G-mod comic I've been working on and will be working on, pages 1-4.
Stole the idea from Ravenholm Armoury (Superb comic), and it plays out in d1_trainstation_02, but the rest is mine. I promise.
Comments/Suggestions most welcome.
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Posted 18 years ago2005-12-11 17:46:43 UTC
Post #151759
I like it. The posing was erm......wierd in some places but its a nice funny comic.
7.5/10
7.5/10
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-11 18:05:19 UTC
Post #151760
Finally, an original Gmod comic idea.
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-11 18:06:42 UTC
Post #151763
you should have stopped after the first page i got bored b4 finishing
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-11 18:09:23 UTC
Post #151764
Mario:The whole point of webcomics are that they never end 
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WCDude: Sarcasm? If not, this is hardly original. But thanks. I think.
4thgen: Thanks, you too. What posing needs improvement, bytheway?
.WCDude: Sarcasm? If not, this is hardly original. But thanks. I think.
4thgen: Thanks, you too. What posing needs improvement, bytheway?
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-11 18:20:22 UTC
Post #151772
Personally I thought it was funnier than the other comics, but it lacked one thing: THE ABILITY TO FUCKING DOWNLOAD IT ON 56K. Change those images to at LEAST 40% size and you can post them.
But it seriously does put me in mind of a local guy who just demanded "GOT MONEY!"
Worst beggar, EVER.
But it seriously does put me in mind of a local guy who just demanded "GOT MONEY!"
Worst beggar, EVER.
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-11 18:34:50 UTC
Post #151782
Hey Zombie, nice comic you have thar, 2nd best on PHW i think.
Ravenholm armory!
Guess what? I suppose you have seen Weekday strip? I help now ith it...
my first episode: http://www.phwcomics.com/index.php?pid=12&cid=434&cs=38
Larry (me)
Rich (Major.Dump)
Anyway:
Posing 1.5/3 - still needs work, I suggest you read this : http://boards.phwcomics.com/showthread.php?t=3955
Editing 2/3 - Dunno, speech bubbles seemed kinda... y'know, bad. Other than that, fine.
Story/Humor 2/3 - lol
Bonus: 1/1 - Because I can tell you put some effort into this.
Overall: 6.5/10 - Better than most.
yay!
Ravenholm armory!
Guess what? I suppose you have seen Weekday strip? I help now ith it...
my first episode: http://www.phwcomics.com/index.php?pid=12&cid=434&cs=38
Larry (me)
Rich (Major.Dump)
Anyway:
Posing 1.5/3 - still needs work, I suggest you read this : http://boards.phwcomics.com/showthread.php?t=3955
Editing 2/3 - Dunno, speech bubbles seemed kinda... y'know, bad. Other than that, fine.
Story/Humor 2/3 - lol
Bonus: 1/1 - Because I can tell you put some effort into this.
Overall: 6.5/10 - Better than most.
yay!
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-11 19:00:47 UTC
Post #151792
Lol I put a hell of a lot of effort in my comic 
Took me 2 hours to edit
Anyway Zombie you posted the same comic twice but it was a good comic...Shame you didn't start off the comic series.
Took me 2 hours to edit
Anyway Zombie you posted the same comic twice but it was a good comic...Shame you didn't start off the comic series.
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-11 19:11:27 UTC
Post #151797
I noticed the mixed-up pages... Accidently saved over page4 as page2. Should work now. Also reduced filesizes alot (jpg quality 60).
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-11 19:52:16 UTC
Post #151810
It wasn't sarcasim. I've never seen a Gmod comic with a crazy russian gman before, unless that literally is what the Ravenholm comic idea was.
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-11 19:54:29 UTC
Post #151814
This is almost exactly like Ravenholm Armoury, and since I like it, I like this.
Nice posing too
Nice posing too
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-11 19:56:39 UTC
Post #151815
I've never seen a Gmod comic with a crazy russian gman before, unless that literally is what the Ravenholm comic idea was.It was, sadly enough.
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-11 21:31:20 UTC
Post #151823
Well then. You suck! lolololollololololololololololoolloloolls
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-11 21:34:56 UTC
Post #151829
Great job ZL finally a funy comic on this site. Couple questions though, I am not good in languages, was that just American with Russian/German(or any other European country) letters, or was that an actual language, cause I could read it, and it added to the humor.
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-11 21:50:52 UTC
Post #151832
Not bad ZL! (I see you used those Hi-Def skins [I think] )
The depth blur you used in some of the shots looks a little strange, especially in the last frame of the last comic (there's a distinct line where its clear and where it blurs - graphics card issue or overuse of depth blur?)
The depth blur you used in some of the shots looks a little strange, especially in the last frame of the last comic (there's a distinct line where its clear and where it blurs - graphics card issue or overuse of depth blur?)
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-12 04:33:26 UTC
Post #151863
was that just American with Russian/German(or any other European country) lettersENGLISH, IDIOT!
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-12 04:38:40 UTC
Post #151864
Lol, great comic!
Finnaly one that I can read.
Finnaly one that I can read.
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-12 04:55:32 UTC
Post #151870
was that an actual language, cause I could read it,No, it was 100% Russian, but you still read it, you bilingual sexpot you.
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-12 05:55:18 UTC
Post #151872
I thought it was good use a different font it was kinda hard to read. but i managed. other wise it is quite funny 
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-12 13:10:58 UTC
Post #151910
ha... thats excellent! finally gman making something out of his life... rather than spending his whole time following Freeman around and... well, just pissing him off!! truly unoriginal!
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-12 13:26:18 UTC
Post #151915
Thanks for all the comments, greatly appreciated.
To straighten some things out:
No, that's ofcourse not any language other than English. Uses the soviet font (which I will replace if I find something more subtle, needs to be soviet-y though.)
Ant: Clumsy blur filter usage, probably. My bad, won't happen again.
Also, the Gman is just an actor in the show. His stage name is Kasparov.
Edit:
Pages 5 and 6 will probably be made on tuesday.
To straighten some things out:
No, that's ofcourse not any language other than English. Uses the soviet font (which I will replace if I find something more subtle, needs to be soviet-y though.)
Ant: Clumsy blur filter usage, probably. My bad, won't happen again.
Also, the Gman is just an actor in the show. His stage name is Kasparov.
Edit:
Pages 5 and 6 will probably be made on tuesday.
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-12 13:31:49 UTC
Post #151917
I like it, yet, I think you are going too far on the Russian Gman thing (or Kasparov as you call him)
I thought it was an interesting silly twist that Gman was a breifcase salesman.. but I think it should have ended after that. Decent posing though.
I thought it was an interesting silly twist that Gman was a breifcase salesman.. but I think it should have ended after that. Decent posing though.
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-12 13:34:59 UTC
Post #151918
i like the russian looking text!
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-12 15:18:52 UTC
Post #151936
I think it's hilarious, but find the use of Russian letters instead of English ones which "look sort of similar" very confusing. Like where it's meant to say "ah", it actually says "dn", in Russian.
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-12 18:41:24 UTC
Post #151952
Well not sure if it looks Russian so much as it does Arabian, but a god foreign looking font is Bremen Bd Bt.
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-12 19:10:33 UTC
Post #151957
It is largely just Cyrillic. Doesn't remind you of the signs in-game?
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-13 12:06:54 UTC
Post #152027
Is there gonna be more?
Are you working on a "part 2"?
Are you working on a "part 2"?
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-13 12:09:23 UTC
Post #152028
Hahahah! Awesome!
More, plz..
More, plz..
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-13 14:08:18 UTC
Post #152058
I think it was largely well done.
The fonts where superbly chosen.
The posing was alright, it varied greatly, from very good to very bad.
I didn't find it all that funny to be honest.
The story was good and the actual comic itself was well made.
So 8/10 I guess.
The fonts where superbly chosen.
The posing was alright, it varied greatly, from very good to very bad.
I didn't find it all that funny to be honest.
The story was good and the actual comic itself was well made.
So 8/10 I guess.
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-13 18:32:53 UTC
Post #152173
Also, set up a new site where I will be posting comics. Enjoy :).
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-13 18:42:27 UTC
Post #152174
Hahaha
Funny, and nice "happy" posing.
Funny, and nice "happy" posing.
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-13 18:46:22 UTC
Post #152175
Keep telling us when you post a comic so we know when to look.
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-13 18:48:22 UTC
Post #152178
Or update every week or something to that effect.
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-13 18:59:49 UTC
Post #152180
I will post images both here and on the site. A fair schedual might be like, 2 pages per week... If I don't get bored of making them .
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Posted 18 years ago2005-12-13 19:27:05 UTC
Post #152186
hah, I like it...
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-13 19:50:42 UTC
Post #152194
Very nice
I definately like this one.
I definately like this one.
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-15 13:46:54 UTC
Post #152450
great stuff!
And nice site!
And nice site!
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-15 14:37:58 UTC
Post #152455
The happy Gman looks supreme, although you could make it, that we could see his happy face
Great work.
Great work.
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-16 04:55:15 UTC
Post #152562
I love the picture of Gman's face after she buys one! Priceless.
This community sure loves its comics, doesn't it?
This community sure loves its comics, doesn't it?
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-16 05:28:36 UTC
Post #152573
Well, they're easy and mildly amusing ? or in Loffe's case, pretty damn amusing.
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-16 13:42:01 UTC
Post #152649
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-16 13:48:38 UTC
Post #152650
Hey, I still have you, briefcase.. You're now called Stallin..
ahahahhaahhaahahahaaah!!
Awesome stuff, ZL!
ahahahhaahhaahahahaaah!!
Awesome stuff, ZL!
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-16 13:53:45 UTC
Post #152651
Have, actually. But thanks.
There's a major plot twist coming, next page
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There's a major plot twist coming, next page
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Posted 18 years ago2005-12-16 14:10:11 UTC
Post #152652
aws0m.
just noticed. It says "Suitcase" in the first one. Typo?
just noticed. It says "Suitcase" in the first one. Typo?
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-16 14:13:22 UTC
Post #152653
its possible to add a plot twist to this story? D nice work
D nice work
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-16 14:31:42 UTC
Post #152656
I always typo suitcase instead of briefcase : .
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-16 14:40:32 UTC
Post #152659
Hahaha, great stuff ZL, those were all pretty much funny...
calling his briefcase Stalin? Lol
calling his briefcase Stalin? Lol
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-16 21:46:35 UTC
Post #152714
suitcase means the same a briefcase.
Great comic though
Great comic though
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-17 05:37:31 UTC
Post #152741
i think it is weird seeing g-man happy he is always sad or trying to kill me. i made a list for all the times g-man tryed to kill me.
in HL1 he trys to crush me and in OP4 he trys to blow me up with two nuke and then he hire me after he trys to kill me
in HL1 he trys to crush me and in OP4 he trys to blow me up with two nuke and then he hire me after he trys to kill me
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-17 06:44:55 UTC
Post #152755
Wait, why is there a half a zombie hanging in the first pic? 
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