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Unforseen Consequences
Created 18 years ago2005-12-09 23:02:14 UTC by
Archie
Created 18 years ago2005-12-09 23:02:14 UTC by
Archie
Posted 18 years ago2006-04-26 13:19:51 UTC
Post #176850
ISSUE 12!!!!
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Posted 18 years ago2006-04-26 13:36:19 UTC
Post #176858
oh god, dont put smileys in speech bubbles, keep author comments seperate from the comic
Posted 18 years ago2006-04-26 15:12:38 UTC
Post #176874
I like I like, made me chuckle but yeah the 
:S always put me off in your comics.
:S always put me off in your comics.
Posted 18 years ago2006-04-26 15:56:06 UTC
Post #176884
Hunter, I laughed out loud. Congrats on your effort.
The theme of pushing the gman around in a dumpster is hilarious!
The theme of pushing the gman around in a dumpster is hilarious!
Posted 18 years ago2006-04-26 16:06:21 UTC
Post #176886
yay ^_^
cheers, guys!
@jobabob -
1) wtf?! no outragous sarcasm?!
2) how do you know g-man wasn't saying "colon oh!"
cheers, guys!
@jobabob -
1) wtf?! no outragous sarcasm?!
2) how do you know g-man wasn't saying "colon oh!"
Posted 18 years ago2006-04-26 16:30:51 UTC
Post #176889
The posing's certainly improving. The end of this one trailed off rather, though.
Posted 18 years ago2006-04-26 17:17:37 UTC
Post #176896
no i like the smilies in the bubbles. Works as authors comment and as gman enjoying himself. Made him more funny
Nice job.
Nice job.
Posted 18 years ago2006-04-26 18:13:41 UTC
Post #176912
yes, but you'd find it funny if he put a picture of a dog in one of the panels for no reason. Of course I couldnt create a comic to save my life. I do understand what makes a good comic though, for reference browse a few at http://cheston.com/pbf/archive.html , he can achieve in 3 panels what most artists can't do in 9.
Posted 18 years ago2006-04-26 22:24:57 UTC
Post #176948
the few cartoon i saw on ur site jobabod r ueber corny and not funny, though there are a few good ones. g-man with is funny
and who cares if i like laughing alot. its healthier than being stuck up
is funnyand who cares if i like laughing alot. its healthier than being stuck up
Posted 18 years ago2006-04-27 03:09:49 UTC
Post #176964
you're 12 arent you
I draw the occaisional avatar which is something completely different, I also use correct spooling and grimmer.
I draw the occaisional avatar which is something completely different, I also use correct spooling and grimmer.
Posted 18 years ago2006-04-27 03:25:44 UTC
Post #176967
actually jobabob, that webcomic you linked is pretty... mediocre..
www.penny-arcade.com
glad you like it Arcan.
Also, jobabob, i think you'll find its speeling and grameer. duuh
www.penny-arcade.com
glad you like it Arcan.
Also, jobabob, i think you'll find its speeling and grameer. duuh
Posted 18 years ago2006-04-27 03:39:18 UTC
Post #176970
Never liked Penny Arcade.
Posted 18 years ago2006-04-27 05:41:53 UTC
Post #176976
To each their own, PBF uses far more wit and visual comedy than any other webcomic i've read. Too many these days are as cliche as your average american sitcom.
Posted 18 years ago2006-04-27 07:54:09 UTC
Post #176981
Agreed. The PBF is a fantastic webcomic. Gotta love black humour!
Posted 18 years ago2006-04-27 15:40:35 UTC
Post #177039
Posted 18 years ago2006-04-27 16:46:28 UTC
Post #177056
Nice flashback effect, loved the combine gunship getting stuck in a little tree 
Posted 18 years ago2006-04-27 16:54:17 UTC
Post #177062
Never liked Penny Arcade.Seconded. PBF is superb, best comic I have read.
Posted 18 years ago2006-04-27 17:05:07 UTC
Post #177065
need to work on your posing a bit, maybe you should reduce it to 6 panels so you arent so pushed with what you need to create?
Posted 18 years ago2006-04-27 17:19:06 UTC
Post #177071
The posing got better after the first half, imo. It's good but there isn't anything gripping, maybe you should add something funny in? Right now it's just another wacky storyline.
Posted 18 years ago2006-04-28 02:39:37 UTC
Post #177153
o/ More comics. What on earth is going on with G-man in the last shot though? An explosion?
Posted 18 years ago2006-04-28 03:17:09 UTC
Post #177160
@strider:
yeah, i wanted a funny background thing. silly and random, but i took the screenshot about a milisecond too late and only got smoke.... didn't work out..
yeah, i wanted a funny background thing. silly and random, but i took the screenshot about a milisecond too late and only got smoke.... didn't work out..
Posted 18 years ago2006-04-28 04:06:58 UTC
Post #177164
Ah ok, just seeing the G-man's legs didn't make much sense to me.
Posted 18 years ago2006-04-28 17:58:06 UTC
Post #177257
no not 12 though it doesnt matter. i still like laughing.
however i dont think this here is very humerous, but im sure other people, other humours. you must have found it very clever indeed
name of the comic: 惡作劇龍
however i dont think this here is very humerous, but im sure other people, other humours. you must have found it very clever indeed
name of the comic: 惡作劇龍
Posted 18 years ago2006-04-29 09:40:31 UTC
Post #177326
Not bad...Keep them coming.
Posted 18 years ago2006-04-29 12:48:21 UTC
Post #177342
Joba: smileys in speechbubbles ftw.
The hunter: Your comics ftw
The hunter: Your comics ftw
Posted 18 years ago2006-04-29 13:22:06 UTC
Post #177344
XD
cheers, madcow
cheers, madcow
Posted 17 years ago2006-05-18 17:43:32 UTC
Post #180847
ISSUE 14!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I spent the longest time editing this one... Tried to make all the speech bubbles look nice, and adjusting the lighting and such...
Oh, and birds are THE MOST annoying things to pose. Ever.
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I spent the longest time editing this one... Tried to make all the speech bubbles look nice, and adjusting the lighting and such...
Oh, and birds are THE MOST annoying things to pose. Ever.
Posted 17 years ago2006-05-18 18:02:18 UTC
Post #180849
Heh, amusing. Nicely done.
"Offerring"?
"Offerring"?
Posted 17 years ago2006-05-18 21:05:06 UTC
Post #180862
All of these, awesome! I love this comic! Keep up the good work!
Keep up the good work!
Posted 17 years ago2006-05-18 21:30:26 UTC
Post #180874
Kinda reminds me of Weekend At Bernies 2
Posted 17 years ago2006-05-19 04:37:55 UTC
Post #180913
woot. thanks for the comments ^_^
Oh, and Seventh, every comic needs a spelling mistake
Also, i edited the second last panel in issue 13... If you cant see a difference, refresh the page or the image a few times.
Oh, and Seventh, every comic needs a spelling mistake
Also, i edited the second last panel in issue 13... If you cant see a difference, refresh the page or the image a few times.
Posted 17 years ago2006-05-19 05:11:02 UTC
Post #180919
G-man hiding on the Van roof was hilarious, especially considering he's normally too drunk to even walk! You can't see the bird to clearly but you get the joke there. And good Barney gag, nice work.
OMG I R COMMENT?!?!? Hunter happy?
OMG I R COMMENT?!?!? Hunter happy?
Posted 17 years ago2006-05-19 05:51:16 UTC
Post #180922
Hunter R happie indeed!
Posted 17 years ago2006-05-19 10:43:12 UTC
Post #180948
'Commented'
Happy? You didn't say anything about writing what I think about it
Happy? You didn't say anything about writing what I think about it
Posted 17 years ago2006-05-19 11:53:06 UTC
Post #180952
Made me laugh!
You pwn
You pwn
Posted 17 years ago2006-05-19 14:51:37 UTC
Post #180982
ftw
Posted 17 years ago2006-07-22 20:29:40 UTC
Post #191314
Posted 17 years ago2006-07-22 20:41:23 UTC
Post #191316
Nice use of van. Sadly I think a real one would have crushed a bunch. WE WILL ALWAYS REMEMBER HIM FOR HIS uh...saving children from a burning ophanage?
Posted 17 years ago2006-07-22 21:36:57 UTC
Post #191318
The posing wat amazingly well done in the 6th, 7th, and 10th frames. I especially like the view of the sun in the last frame.
Last frame made me laugh
Last frame made me laugh
Posted 17 years ago2006-07-22 22:38:10 UTC
Post #191319
thankyou
i've just finished issue 16, but im gonna wait a day or so before i post it..
i've just finished issue 16, but im gonna wait a day or so before i post it..
Posted 17 years ago2006-07-23 08:42:44 UTC
Post #191362
Bump
Pretty good, not funny but I'm sure you're getting to that in the next issue or so.
Good posing but the oh my head put me off...More like ow would have suited me.
Lets see where this takes us.
Pretty good, not funny but I'm sure you're getting to that in the next issue or so.
Good posing but the oh my head put me off...More like ow would have suited me.
Lets see where this takes us.
Posted 17 years ago2006-07-23 17:01:39 UTC
Post #191396
yeah, the next one sees the welcome return of drunk g-man to the plot.
I'm sure that'll make most people happy..
I also made issue 16 (not yet released) at a rediculously high resolution ( I normally only run at 800 x 600 ) and took screenshots and posed at 5fps, so hopefully it'll be really high quality..
I'm sure that'll make most people happy..
I also made issue 16 (not yet released) at a rediculously high resolution ( I normally only run at 800 x 600 ) and took screenshots and posed at 5fps, so hopefully it'll be really high quality..
Posted 17 years ago2006-07-23 17:08:23 UTC
Post #191397
good posing, a drunk G-man flying away from the crashing car would have been cool though
and I like the way you did the sun in the last frame
and I like the way you did the sun in the last frame
Posted 17 years ago2006-07-23 17:19:41 UTC
Post #191398
so.. should i release issue 16 now or wait a while longer?
Posted 17 years ago2006-07-23 17:24:55 UTC
Post #191399
Release! You can do better then issue 15th, show us!
Posted 17 years ago2006-07-23 17:34:48 UTC
Post #191400
Posted 17 years ago2006-07-23 17:51:26 UTC
Post #191401
posing could have been a bit better, and having norm standing speechless or something for another frame would be good
Posted 17 years ago2006-07-23 17:58:36 UTC
Post #191402
I agree with Gargeh. Better then 15 though.
Posted 17 years ago2006-07-23 20:23:18 UTC
Post #191407
the look on his face is like. "wh0t?"
Posted 17 years ago2006-07-23 22:33:15 UTC
Post #191409
I think the rebel fellowed talked a bit too much, otherwise it's neat.
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