Foreigner Created 17 years ago2006-06-19 03:16:50 UTC by Soup Miner

http://s12.invisionfree.com/DontTouchMeThere/index.php?showtopic=112&st=0#entry3335931
I hope you enjoy this. And please don't post feedback there, post it here. That forum is basically made of an inner circle of my friends and we want to stay small like that.
Edit: Don't mind the PHIOO! where its supposed to say "phil". Some "genious" thought it would be a good idea to make censors on people's real name and someone's name just happens to be Phil so everytime you want to say something with the word "phil" in it, the censors just destroy the damn thing.

you honestly think anyones going to read that?

Proper paragraphs, punctuation and line breaks please, and I might just be bothered to read through it.

Cant you just tell us what it is about i mean that i flippin long passage..
Maybe you could write a summary for us

Its a story. And don't be a grammar Nazi, I wrote it so that it flows when you read it. An the forum doesn't allow tabs, the paragraph indentions weren't my fault. They were there originally.