Foreigner Created 18 years ago2006-06-19 03:16:50 UTC by Soup Miner Soup Miner

Created 18 years ago2006-06-19 03:16:50 UTC by Soup Miner Soup Miner

Posted 18 years ago2006-06-19 03:16:50 UTC Post #185776
http://s12.invisionfree.com/DontTouchMeThere/index.php?showtopic=112&st=0#entry3335931
I hope you enjoy this. And please don't post feedback there, post it here. That forum is basically made of an inner circle of my friends and we want to stay small like that.
Edit: Don't mind the PHIOO! where its supposed to say "phil". Some "genious" thought it would be a good idea to make censors on people's real name and someone's name just happens to be Phil so everytime you want to say something with the word "phil" in it, the censors just destroy the damn thing.
Posted 18 years ago2006-06-19 05:26:14 UTC Post #185781
you honestly think anyones going to read that?
Posted 18 years ago2006-06-19 07:03:47 UTC Post #185788
Proper paragraphs, punctuation and line breaks please, and I might just be bothered to read through it.
Posted 18 years ago2006-06-19 08:03:33 UTC Post #185805
Cant you just tell us what it is about i mean that i flippin long passage..
Maybe you could write a summary for us
Posted 18 years ago2006-06-19 12:52:25 UTC Post #185923
Its a story. And don't be a grammar Nazi, I wrote it so that it flows when you read it. An the forum doesn't allow tabs, the paragraph indentions weren't my fault. They were there originally.
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