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Your still almost incoherent English is hilarious.

Yes it's a cheap shot, but it still made me laugh.

Thanks for the appreciations !

Really, all the people I showed this video liked it(many laughed) .... you have a very strange feel of humour ( I know the video isn't so funny, but it's not "awful")...cold humour ....

The song is crap ? Oh sorry for not putting rolling stones !

[EDIT] Oh sorry muzzeh, I thought you send it

[EDIT2] I would like a description of how would you do this to be cool and funny

I never send you that track. I don't even like that one.

Money and creative work with creative people... nice place ^_^

really poor.

The editing is dire. Like, utterly without exception awful. Constant cuts to black followed by the same scene again is pointless and an eyesore.
You don't need to rewind and play a scene 60 times. They weren't even particularly interesting scenes.
You did nothing i hadn't seen before, or done myself in GTAIV, so i lost interest.

Finally, the song is crap.

Yah, I won't.

Serios and large work, my respect ^_^.

If I can hang out at TWHL and get a great job, so can you! SHUT UP AND MAP!
lol. But seriously. Its all study and good ol'fashioned hard work. Anyone can do that.

Awesome, congrats! :]

so where's the HLDM version?

Not quite an example map - moved to Unfinished. Feel free to move it to Completed once it's finished.

Wow. congrats, seems like a well paid place

Smart rewording you did there! Congrats on getting in!

I called that stuff "scene design." Clever rewordings work.

I guess maps with models in them CAN be used as media if you record them.

Its not Valve. Its all media based stuff. You can check out GRASP Media's website (not porn) if you want.

I am showing in business casual clothing though, if i like good, they look good.

That is a really casual company. Is it Valve? Did you get a job at Valve?

Ah come on! I read that and eagerly wanted to read what kind of job it was and you don't tell us!? D:

Great job Rim!

Congratulations.

holy businessmen in boxer-shorts, batman!

Maybe it was all a test to see if you kept a formal and business-like attitude in an atmosphere of extreme casualness.

:3

Business operated in a lake house? Hawaiian theme? Vice president in boxers with other employees freely roaming about? Interview on the lakeside?
Clearly a porn business.

Well there's your HOLYSHITFUCK for the year. Congratulations, and keep us up to date!

Lmao Mariowned. True that.

Before I finished reading, I pictured you riding your bike in a suit... anyway... congrats man and good luck.

It sounds really sweet Rimrook! An internship with some class and distinction it sounds like, and it sounds like you "wow'd" them pretty good with your resume. Excellent! = )

Awesome!
I'm so happy to hear that your time spent here was not for nothing!
congratulations on so many levels!
Luke already said this, but good luck, and do keep us informed with all the juicy details.

That does sound extremely awesome. I'd say it's pretty well deserved just based off your work.

Good luck with this opportunity.

Holy awesome! What kind of place is it? Game industry, modelling, media, or what? Sounds like you got one hell of a good deal.

wow.. i'm such as a expert mapper.. i get all this quite right.. i really never need multi_manager, but i see that it a easy-usefull entity. thanks SlayerA !

Black chrome gearstick which glows white.

seatbelt pads.

Mats with metal grids on them.

Blue and black rubber steering wheel cover with tribal designs on it.

I don't why i can use carve. All people say "don't use carve. carve it's a shit" but ... if the option is there, i'd use it. i don't think that Half Life staff create hl without using carve.

You never did finish this... I want to know more about the story!

lololol no beard.
You should see me after a week without shaving. Wow.

Well, there goes MY plan to give the presidential vehicles hydrogen fuel cells..

Anarchy is bad.

And pepper, you need to be born in the us to be qualified as president.
Which is why Governator hasn't ran yet.

what type of car stuff did you get?
are they tribal stripes like mine?

... cough*TWHL has both*cough

There are no blacks or girls on the internet.

until you get a girlfriend who doest like haryness. Im bald all the way down mate!

17 here, and everytime Livewire sees me, he tells me to shave. I REFUSE.

beards ftw.

heh 16 here and i have a full grown beard!

nah, if only

No, you'd be wrong. And put that back where it belongs.

So would I be right in saying Jeff is a girl? faps

Gee, I never knew raver was black.

No one ever knows anything about anyone on the internet. For instance, when you're on the internet, you're male, even when you're not. People just always say 'he' because they asume that the person IS a 'he'

I wish I could modify it, but my laptop has been confiscated for the week, as a result of not attempting to study for my exams. D:
I know of several problems, such as the lack of detail on the computers, or a lack of seats in the cockpit. That was mostly because I was getting a lot of the short ### faces error. When I get my laptop on the weekend I might increase the size of some of the less noticeable textures, so I can add more detail to the computers. I'll better the lighting and sound as well.

si senor.

If I don't shave, people start speaking Spanish to me. I have a bit of Native American blood in me. :/ My mustache parts in the middle and I think that's the dead giveaway.

You have to give it a light weight figure for it to be pickable. You can even give it presets like "Rock Light" which will be pickable with the gravity gun.

Hey thanks again for joining the project again and i really like your map and the star wars theme! = )

Your map has some very carefully designed and very pretty architecture likthe column trims, those cool looming ceiling structures, and everything comes together nicely at the big cockpit area--which is also done REALLY well. (there are also no brushwork errors.) Brushing and strong attention to detail are the strongest points of this map. That said i think there is a lot of room for improvement in the other areas.

I know you mentioned you were tired when you made it so i'll be brief; you probably already know all the suggestions i will make:

-lighting is super-bleh. i would try a very very light blue and have some nice contrast areas of light and dark on the edges of the bridge, with bright lights at the doors, middle bridge, and cockpit. (that's what i would do)
-no sounds. Starwars was known as a franchise to have amazing sound work and effects. not using those sounds--ripped from battlefront, the movies, or any number of spinoffs--, would be a crime to humanity! = )
-texturing is very bleh/generic but i'm sure you are aware of this.
-add sprites and animated textures to the consoles and computers to make them stand out the way they should...
-those big, blocky "fifties-style" computers in the center of the bridge area really detract form the pretty trims and detail on the walls and up on the ceiling. I would modify or eliminate them altogether. (even in the screenshot those blocky things are covering up all your nice stuff, which to say the least the screenshot does not do the map justice.)

I know i had more concerns but i'm tired and can't think straight anymore. Just wanted you to know i really like this map but i hope you continue to work on it... it could be SO much better! = )

5 stars for pwn starwars and pwn brushwork. win.
*****

Gee, I never knew raver was black.

I'm sure Obama has gotten that same speech, WC.