Oh yeah, and, I ROCK! J/k
Bigger Worlds Ep. 1 & 2. A new comic!
Created 18 years ago2006-01-01 19:57:01 UTC by
Dr. Mapper
Created 18 years ago2006-01-01 19:57:01 UTC by
Dr. Mapper
Posted 18 years ago2006-01-01 19:57:01 UTC
Post #155719
Episode 1:Episode 2:Well, this is a new series from me. I have completed the combines end, But I don't know when to post it. At the end of the week I suppose. For now, read my new Comic people.
Oh yeah, and, I ROCK! J/k
Oh yeah, and, I ROCK! J/k
Posted 18 years ago2006-01-01 20:14:33 UTC
Post #155720
Interesting. A new topic, to my knowledge, and nicely-presented.
Posted 18 years ago2006-01-01 20:16:23 UTC
Post #155722
Thank you.
At the current moment I'm reading a tut, that tells me how to get good looking photoshop shadows. thanks!
At the current moment I'm reading a tut, that tells me how to get good looking photoshop shadows. thanks!
Posted 18 years ago2006-01-01 20:29:47 UTC
Post #155726
I have one criticism. It's too long for one issue in my opinion. It would have made it much more attractive if you have broken it into smaller chunks. Apart from that it's good on most other aspects.
Posted 18 years ago2006-01-01 20:32:33 UTC
Post #155728
WTF?
I thought nice long episodes would be really good!
Infact, they are better than short ones IMO. Infact, the whole of PHW would disagree with you there mate!
Besides, this is two short episodes anyway!
I thought nice long episodes would be really good!
Infact, they are better than short ones IMO. Infact, the whole of PHW would disagree with you there mate!
Besides, this is two short episodes anyway!
Posted 18 years ago2006-01-01 20:42:51 UTC
Post #155729
woah. LOADS of spelling mistakes...
also, the blur is really over-used and the kneeling pose when he picks up the gun is pretty bad... appart from that, nice one!
also, the blur is really over-used and the kneeling pose when he picks up the gun is pretty bad... appart from that, nice one!
Posted 18 years ago2006-01-01 20:49:13 UTC
Post #155732
Please tell me what spelling mistakes?
Posted 18 years ago2006-01-01 21:08:19 UTC
Post #155734
Page one: Corpes be corpse (or corpses).
Page two, top: woild should be would.
Page two: he says, in big blue letters, "onshap". Should be "Oh snap"?
Page two: cat says "You pwned your self" - should be yourself.
Good comic, interesting idea. Not very funny though.
Page two, top: woild should be would.
Page two: he says, in big blue letters, "onshap". Should be "Oh snap"?
Page two: cat says "You pwned your self" - should be yourself.
Good comic, interesting idea. Not very funny though.
Posted 18 years ago2006-01-01 22:43:00 UTC
Post #155745
turn down the blur
Posted 18 years ago2006-01-02 10:21:55 UTC
Post #155779
ermm... whoops?
oh, and the "OHSNAP!" is something michael keeps saying on PHW with no spaces.
I can't fix errors cos I can't edit the post. I'll wont make future mistakes!
^^that was a test of shadows^^
oh, and the "OHSNAP!" is something michael keeps saying on PHW with no spaces.
I can't fix errors cos I can't edit the post. I'll wont make future mistakes!
Posted 18 years ago2006-01-02 10:30:45 UTC
Post #155780
Really Creative Dr.Mapper! I liked it! 
Posted 18 years ago2006-01-02 10:31:14 UTC
Post #155782
looks good 
Posted 18 years ago2006-01-02 12:33:45 UTC
Post #155801
also, if its your bedroom that you're shooting this in, dont forget to hide the 'my little pony?' poster & the male pr0n 
Posted 18 years ago2006-01-02 12:40:48 UTC
Post #155803
Nice idea with the real world thing
Posted 18 years ago2006-01-02 14:23:42 UTC
Post #155816
Turn down that blur, it looks nasty! We know you can use lans flare and blur options in photoshop so you don't haev to show off!
For instence, it's nice that the two combines are blured and the dead body isn't but why is the floor below the corpse is blured too? Looks ureal, blur the two combine soilders, the wall in the distence, and the far bit of thw floor only.
For instence, it's nice that the two combines are blured and the dead body isn't but why is the floor below the corpse is blured too? Looks ureal, blur the two combine soilders, the wall in the distence, and the far bit of thw floor only.
Posted 18 years ago2006-01-02 14:37:44 UTC
Post #155818
lol, that was great. Like seventh said, very original.
Spelling... could be better...
Spelling... could be better...
Posted 18 years ago2006-01-02 15:55:06 UTC
Post #155841
Okay, notes taken for the next episode!
Thanks guys
Thanks guys
Posted 18 years ago2006-01-02 17:23:19 UTC
Post #155856
I'll wont make future mistakes!I very much hope you were trying to inject some sarcasm there.
I'm not trying to be over critical but.....
I want to know how many people didn't read this comic because of its length. It seemed kind of daunting reading through it.
Posted 18 years ago2006-01-02 17:36:59 UTC
Post #155860
wtf is it with you and length?
The best comic on this planet is huge!
made by spaztique!
The best comic on this planet is huge!
made by spaztique!
Posted 18 years ago2006-01-02 17:40:19 UTC
Post #155861
Not meaning to be rude but...
You said it yourself The Best, he gets away with it since he has done everything well. Unfortunately length wasn't the only criticism of your comic.
Just improve for next time.
You said it yourself The Best, he gets away with it since he has done everything well. Unfortunately length wasn't the only criticism of your comic.
Just improve for next time.
Posted 18 years ago2006-01-02 17:56:47 UTC
Post #155864
This is a good work to me, but you will have to modify the formatting once you'll find a publisher for the paper version ...
Some points I don't like :
_we don't know the name of the guys,
_we didn't see Gordon, I mean come on guys, we didn't see Gordon, not even a single f#ck#ng crate !!!"
the stuff black hole in the sky could need more frames, or "GGRrmmblbmmrrr" sound or something, maybe a change in the lighting I don't know, it looks too flat actually to me ...
...Some points I don't like :
_we don't know the name of the guys,
_we didn't see Gordon, I mean come on guys, we didn't see Gordon, not even a single f#ck#ng crate !!!"
the stuff black hole in the sky could need more frames, or "GGRrmmblbmmrrr" sound or something, maybe a change in the lighting I don't know, it looks too flat actually to me ...
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