So you know how we used to do Map of the Month here at TWHL? Guess I missed it so I decided to flex my reviewing muscle once again. It may need a couple more attempts to get back into the full swing of things.
Anywho, here is the first of many (maybe) GoldSource mod reviews.Feel free to link me to any mods you think could do with a good tongue lashing.
Also, I fixed your link. Don't put quotes around URLs in BBCode >_>
I'd be willing to pick up MOTM again.
@Dimbark: My bad, I b0rked the link. Still, it's time to start using a proper browser. Get Firefox.
Try to speak more like you're having a conversation with someone.
"I don't talk like that..."
Make key points bold to make sure you cover them, but the rest will connect more naturally if you only use your script as a guide.