Journal #7387 by monster_urby

monster_urby

Posted 13 years ago2011-09-09 00:00:39 UTC

monster_urbyGoldsourcerer

So you know how we used to do Map of the Month here at TWHL? Guess I missed it so I decided to flex my reviewing muscle once again. It may need a couple more attempts to get back into the full swing of things.

Anywho, here is the first of many (maybe) GoldSource mod reviews.

Feel free to link me to any mods you think could do with a good tongue lashing.

Dimbeak

Commented 13 years ago2011-09-09 00:11:50 UTC Comment #43156

Internet Explorer could not open the webpage.

Penguinboy

Commented 13 years ago2011-09-09 00:11:51 UTC Comment #43154

If you feel like you could do one of these a month, do you want to pick up the MOTM again? We really need someone (or several someones) to start doing them again...Daubster doesn't have the time anymore. How about it?

Also, I fixed your link. Don't put quotes around URLs in BBCode >_>

monster_urby

Commented 13 years ago2011-09-09 00:21:01 UTC Comment #43151

Gargh. Cheers. Been doing so much image css at work I got quotes out the arse.

I'd be willing to pick up MOTM again.

@Dimbark: My bad, I b0rked the link. Still, it's time to start using a proper browser. Get Firefox.

Dimbeak

Commented 13 years ago2011-09-09 00:50:30 UTC Comment #43157

I like Chrome.

Soup Miner

Commented 13 years ago2011-09-09 01:57:20 UTC Comment #43150

Some constructive criticism: Please try to avoid speaking in the same way that you might write an article -- especially with asking the viewer questions like "Will it live up to my expectations?" It sort of sounds like you're trying to be professional, but it really just sounds rather boring.
Try to speak more like you're having a conversation with someone.

Striker

Commented 13 years ago2011-09-09 07:14:15 UTC Comment #43155

Nice review.

monster_urby

Commented 13 years ago2011-09-09 10:58:26 UTC Comment #43152

@Soup Miner: Yeah, I realised that after watching it back.

"I don't talk like that..."

Archie

Commented 13 years ago2011-09-09 19:46:27 UTC Comment #43153

Yeah, by all means write out your review before recording as you obviously have, but don't feel the need to stick to it word for word.
Make key points bold to make sure you cover them, but the rest will connect more naturally if you only use your script as a guide.

Mcrich114

Commented 13 years ago2011-09-10 03:47:34 UTC Comment #43158

Loved it ( the review not the mod it looks terrible). Please make more Urby!

Journal #7387

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