Mr. Habboi, I'd like to start by saying that the music on the video was rather annoying.
The level design is not up to your usual standards, and in a competition which involves remaking something, I'd suggest you focus a lot more on brushwork and lighting detail. At the moment, it's almost just a straight remake of the original, and doesn't look improved too much (apart from Sources nice lighting and high resolution textures). Obviously, it's just a work in progress, but I'd suggest you go back to the buildings you have already constructed and detail them a little more. Decals/Overlays, props, and lighting details will definitely help.
At the moment, I just can't see it placing anywhere near a trophy against such quality opposition (Rabid, Kasperg, Doodle, etc.)
Keep on going, and take these comments to improve your map, instead of becoming insulted by them. Those who take offence to such things are complete knobtards and have no idea what it takes to improve.
Good luck.